A Sneak Peek at What We Look For in Flash Contest Submissions

Double Check Your Work:

Here are some of the things we look for as we read your submissions to our Flash Contests. If you have something that deviates from this, it might still knock our socks off, but these are some general guidelines. If we love or hate your main character, you’ll stand a better chance than if we feel neutral about her/him. 

  1. Does the author’s point come across clearly or are you a little confused?
  2. Did the characters change? Should they have?
  3. Did the action fit the story? Was there too much or too little action?
  4. Were the description, sentence structure, pace, tone, and mood appropriate?
  5. Is there additional information that would have made this clearer? 
  6. Did the voice keep you reading? 
  7. Did you stop paying attention at any point? 
  8. Was the writing insightful?
  9. Do you want to read more work by this author? 
  10. Did you find something exceptional that is not mentioned above?

If you can’t be objective about your own writing, you’re not alone. Ask a trusted writing partner to read your work and see what she thinks. 

Want to enter Writer Advice’s Flash Fiction Contest? Details, deadline, prizes, tiered fees, and publication information are at https://writeradvice.com/latest-contest-information/. We’d love to read your work.

What’s Disrupted in my New Book and Why?

The post below says that Never Too Late: From Wannabe to Wife at 62 is my latest book. It’s time to update that. My newest book is called Disrupted. You can learn about it at https://www.amazon.com/Disrupted-B-Lynn-Goodwin/dp/1804393487, and you can read the opening below.

Chapter 1

Wednesday, October 2, 2019

San Ramos High, Northern California

The earth pounded like a jack hammer. I dropped my phone and

it bounced on the floor of the main hall at San Ramos High. As I

grabbed it, the floor slammed into my feet again. That jack

hammer was working overtime.

“Get in a doorway,” a booming voice called.

I knew that, so I was surprised when the current Student

Council President came running toward me. The girl he was with

said, “Chill. It’s nothing. A trembler—not an earthquake.” I must

have looked worse than I thought because she stared for a minute

before she asked, “You okay?”

I nodded.

“You’re Sandee Mason, right?” the Student Council

President asked.

“That’s me.”

“I remember the assembly where you spoke about your

brother last spring.”

I nodded. Here he was, in the job my brother, Bri, had two

years ago, and I couldn’t help wondering if Bri wanted to tell me

something or warn me about someone. He used to send me

encouraging messages after he died – at least I thought he did –

and I kind of hoped he was trying to get my attention now.

11“Don’t worry, small quakes just release the tension between

the plates. The big one’s further away than ever and it seems like

it’s over now.” He pushed the hall door open for his girlfriend.

“Thanks,” I called after him. My dad had told Bri and me

that factoid years ago.

I grabbed my books and stuffed them in my worn backpack,

then slammed the door, which made as much noise as the under-

earth pounding.

I was already five minutes late for rehearsal. Not good. Ms.

G expected her actors to be prompt, and that went double for the

stage manager—me.

The quake spooked me. So did the Student Council

President. From the back he looked a lot like Bri, but Bri went to

Afghanistan and the body parts they could find came back in a

box.

Opening of Disrupted

Disrupted

Chapter 1

Wednesday, October 2, 2019

San Ramos High, Northern California

The earth pounded like a jack hammer. I dropped my phone and it bounced on the floor of the main hall at San Ramos High. As I grabbed it, the floor slammed into my feet again. That jack hammer was working overtime.

“Get in a doorway,” a booming voice called.

I knew that, so I was surprised when the current Student Council President came running toward me. The girl he was with said, “Chill. It’s nothing. A trembler—not an earthquake.” I must have looked worse than I thought because she stared for a minute before she asked, “You okay?”

I nodded.

“You’re Sandee Mason, right?” the Student Council President asked.

“That’s me.”

“I remember the assembly where you spoke about your brother last spring.”

I nodded. Here he was, in the job my brother, Bri, had two years ago, and I couldn’t help wondering if Bri wanted to tell me something or warn me about someone. He used to send me encouraging messages after he died – at least I thought he did – and I kind of hoped he was trying to get my attention now.

“Don’t worry, small quakes just release the tension between the plates. The big one’s further away than ever and it seems like it’s over now.” He pushed the hall door open for his girlfriend.

“Thanks,” I called after him. My dad had told Bri and me that factoid years ago.

I grabbed my books and stuffed them in my worn backpack, then slammed the door, which made as much noise as the under-earth pounding.

I was already five minutes late for rehearsal. Not good. Ms. G expected her actors to be prompt, and that went double for the stage manager—me.

The quake spooked me. So did the Student Council President. From the back he looked a lot like Bri, but Bri went to Afghanistan and the body parts they could find came back in a box.

The Opening of Never Too Late

Never Too Late—From Wannabe to Wife

Prologue

            I never dreamed that I’d get married for the first time at age 62.

            I think sometimes of the statement I found in the Vassar catalogue the summer before my freshman year: “If you are one of the 93% who eventually marry…” I loved the way “eventually marry” rolled off my tongue and gave me hope.

            During my four years of high school, I’d had only two dates, and one of them was a blind date disaster. Boys wanted to date the pretty, confident girls. I was 5’3” and weighed 155 pounds by the time I graduated. I was told that if I wanted to date, I needed to lose weight. Diets made me crazy. I believed with all my heart that a thin body would give me success and happiness. I had no idea that intelligence, creativity, or confidence were attractive qualities.

            I was incredibly nervous on both my dates. No way the churning in my stomach could be normal. I was too embarrassed to talk to anyone about dating, so I didn’t know, and I was terrified that I would say or do the wrong thing to loosen up and have fun on a date. I had no clue how to flirt without giving a guy the “wrong” idea.

            My personal feelings didn’t guide me. They were buried deep inside, and the older I got the more embarrassing my inexperience became. I coped by hiding it.

I found the man who would become my husband on Craigslist. His ad read

MEN SEEKING WOMEN

Posted: 7-04-11  11:17PM PST

CLASSIC

“1944 classic roadster with many miles left!

“Motor humms, transmission smooth and and all the gears work!

“Only two previous owners, very great women.

“Two tone, white with a gray top.

“Seeking a new woman owner who knows how to drive a classic!

“Thanks

“PS, This car is at church every Sunday so if that is a problem with you this car is not for you.”

Before our first date, he asked if I would be willing to get married if I fell in love with him. He was looking for his third wife. Of course I said yes. After 62 years, I didn’t think it was possible for me to fall in love. I told myself I wasn’t tricking him; I was agreeing to his conditions.

            Part of me was scared I could lose my life savings and my dignity if I got in too deeply, but I also believed it wasn’t too late to live happily ever after. After years of waiting for a male to make the first move, I thought I’d found the man I was seeking.

1, 4 or 5 Stars: Why to Review Right Now

For your consideration.

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You can do something for me today. For every author you know. For even the authors you don’t. An act of literary citizenship that takes 7-10 minutes. Sure, you can spend time and/or money to be a literary citizen—hosting events, blogging, editing or reading for a journal—or contribute gently to your community by giving thoughtful feedback in your own writing group. But to actually help authors sell books, for free, right now:

Write a review.

Not “pitch a review to a literary publication,” although that’s great, too. Not “write a 900-word blog post balancing serious critique with just enough praise.” Not “read the book twice for fairness and highlight quotes and eventually put something up in a couple of months.” Just write and post a short review, right away.

  • Write a review of 3-10 sentences. Maybe quote one line you really liked.
  • Post to Amazon, where you can usually review…

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How Not to Write an Op-Ed (or Errors Made My 1st Time Out)

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By Charles G. Thompson

I have written and published a number of nonfiction pieces. A personal essay about seeing my dead father shopping at Trader Joes. Another essay about my love life as a gay man in Los Angeles. An article about how my perpetual depression lessened during COVID. But, until recently, I had not tried my hand at an op-ed. Yes, similar to writing more personal nonfiction, but different.

The idea for the editorial was spawned by a headline in the Los Angeles Times, “Growing Fears of ‘Dead Pool’ on Colorado River as Drought Threatens Hoover Dam Water,” which reported that Lake Mead could be at “dead pool” levels by 2025. I’m a constant water worrier, having lived in California most of my life, and Lake Mead is an essential source of water for Southern California. Seeing the words “dead pool” frightened me. Did that mean one of our…

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Anatomy of a Reader 

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By Amanda Le Rougetel

To write is one thing, to be read — deeply read, seen on the page for the writer we can be — is another.

Words on a page amount to something or nothing, until someone other than the writer reads them, and then those words amount to a whole new world. A world of response. A world in which the words give shape to life beyond the writer’s hopes and dreams and take hold as the reader’s.

The ultimate reader is one who, like you, reads the piece in published form. But before then, the wise and the brave writer asks for feedback on the early, pre-published drafts. If it takes courage to write, it surely takes courage to ask for feedback and then more courage to receive it: Courage and calm and confidence. Not always present in good measure, but even a scrap of each…

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Nine Ways to Write When You’re the Writer-in-Residence on the Washington State Ferry

I enjoyed this woman’s approach to writing. Hope you like it too. If you’d like to share your writing process, I’d love to hear about it. You can easily reach me through the contact button over at http://www.writeradvice.com. 🙏

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By Iris Graville

  1. Sit. Place a folded sign with your name and title on the table where you usually work. A table under sepia photographs of Coast Salish peoples rocking a baby in a cradleboard, carving wood, and hunting whales. Some of their faces carry deep creases; many fold chapped and worn hands in their laps. They lived, worked on, and cared for this sea long before you did, years before this sixty-year-old vessel plied these waters at 13 knots, coursing between islands that now carry names of European explorers who claimed them as their own.
  2. Scrawl. With a pen in a leather, handbound journal, numbering each page and dating each entry. Record conversations overheard; observations of rocky cliffs, cedars and coppery Madrones, and jewel-like water carrying the 310-foot Tillikum on its route through Washington’s San Juan Islands.
  3. Type. On a shiny, 13-inch, three-pound laptop Coast Salish tribes never…

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